Suggestion file "details" ------------------------- Pg Ln Suggestion by reviewers and others Response by author (indented) --------------------------------------------------------------- 22 Last paragraph: There is something missing in the second sentence General: A number of references are incomplete, e.g. missing page numbers, names of editors, or publishers. I recommend to add this information whenever available. General rules for the suggestion file "details" ----------------------------------------------- The purpose of the present file is to be a service to those who study the article in detail; the information contained here is probably not of importance at a first reading. The file contains suggestions, made by reviewers and others, about points in the text where a clarification or modification appears to be needed. The file does not include - typos and other similar mistakes which every reader can easily accomodate by context - more important comments which properly belong to the general discussion about the article. This working file is created for each reviewed article where this kind of suggestions are received. It is referenced from the article's interaction page, but its contents are not included in the newletter or the news journal. This file is a working area. It is initiated with comments by reviewers and other readers, and complemented by responses from the author. The contents of this file are allowed to change dynamically; earlier versions are not preserved.